Short Story: The Chronicle of the Dubious Egosystem

I have been wanting to write stories for a while now and finally found some time to do. Here is my first piece of writing and it is very much in beta - I have not taken any writing classes or learnt how to do this well - I just had some strange ideas that I wanted to mould into a story. I hope you enjoy!

SUMMARY: The year is 2016 and Akira is a software engineer with a penchant for eating eggs, listening to Marvin Gaye and sticking to routines. His new Avocado phone has been acting strangely lately. In this story we follow him losing control of his life and eventually watch him deal with the bereavement of having to give up his favourite possession in the whole wide world.